Friday, May 20, 2011

Fiery Sun by COLE WILSON

The Sun!
The sun is a yellow
bead getting put
onto a necklace ready
 to be sold in a few days.

The sun is a Halloween
pumpkin cookie in
Starbuck's refrigerator.

The sun is a big gold
shiny crystal ball inside
a clam deep down under
the sea.

The sun is a bright yellow
fish swimming fast away
from a shark.

The sun is a red burning
fire burning down a house.

The sun is a cherry on
an ice cream sundae
melting in someone's hands.
The Sun!

Cole Wilson
4-25-11 

Cole does a lot of writing in his 1st grade class.
They have started writing poetry.
I think this is excellent!


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